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Creative Writing Competition - Adult 18+ Runner-Up



Runner-up: Aruna Stannard 


Aruna says: ‘I am extremely honoured to be chosen as runner up. I’ve always been a writer in my spare moments but writing poetry is something relatively new to me. When I read the theme I knew I wanted to reflect our beautiful town in some way. This poem was inspired by a walk in our lovely public gardens on a difficult day. I realised how many of the things people might find solace in were present - families and friends, nature, a connection to history or religion, ice cream or coffee (or both!)’


Emma Shercliff, literary agent and judge of the adult category said: "I loved the spirit of place captured in this poem, which takes a much broader interpretation of the competition theme. The language is carefully chosen and fluid, and there is some lovely imagery employed here. I enjoyed the innovative use of form, with the playful structure enhancing the impact of the poem, particularly when read aloud. This writer has a fresh, approachable style and, like all good poetry, this poem merits multiple readings - there is an emotional depth to it which I found very moving."


i took the day off and went to abbey gardens 

by Aruna Stannard

and as i came through the mustow gate 

i found a wedding party 

lolling pinstriped at picnic tables 

smiles clattering against champagne glasses 

a nearby tree hurled its confetti  

and i, blinking, captured joy in a dozen frames 

through my shutter eyes 

a tray of pork pies,  

a new dress  

and some hope 

a jackdaw posed at the next-door bench  

pied and patchworked, half made or half undone in sickness or in youth? 

at the kiosk, two women cannot choose  

coffee, ice cream 

coffee, ice cream 

i detect the hint of an accent 

imagine them sisters, friends, lovers  

reunited in this space  

the joy of it they order affogato  

i smile a moment, turn my head, wanting part of it  

near these lichen-coated ancient walls 

holding up ruins, holding up roses  

a spider crawled across my wrist  

i wait 

beneath these trees we need the belief of it  

for these old stones to exhale their years  

whisper 

yes  

yes  

yes 

on the breath of a blessing 

to drench us in something sad and sweet  

like coffee over ice cream 

my heart hangs back wanting to see what that is like but my feet move me on in search of something secret and holy 

like a psalm overheard from the rose garden 





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